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Monday, June 05, 2006

Some speak and Some ...

In the middle of the dialogues of the public passing by
A Not so loud but identifiable sound started piercing the ears;

A voice strong enough to grab much of the people's awareness;
and a physically challenged being the owner of this low cry.

I saw him blessing the groups at the maximum of his vocal vibration;
making it very clear that he thanked all the people who did stop to provide him a penny or two.

He watchfully collected all the penny and placed them into his sack;
showing the world that he has compromised with life;
have found a direction to live on ;leaving all the tears on his back.

I failed to make an error by noticing a elderly man;
who was trying to be comfortable by the street side.

He succeeded by placing his old body against the street wall ;
the wall that has open heartedly supported such uncountable aging bodies.

My uncertain mind interrupted my walk further...

I caught him eyeing a Father and a son;
the son whose stubborn requests were acting as baton for his father,
the son whose each word prefixed "Papa"...

The aged man was keen to observe every play of the child,
Treasuring each moments of the kid with his Father;
As if he visualized himself with his dear ones ...

He conversed zero words but exhibited well;
he too wished his beloved ones to visit him sometime ;
Not to provide him with luxury and comfort;
but just to change the people's custom call for him ...
"A Homeless person "..."A Beggar".

His movements reflected his invisible wounds ;
It seemed; hardly any medication could ease off his pain...

He continued at his position by the street, with a blank face;
Perhaps, still questioning his unblessed fate ...
~Abhi

16 comments:

mattu said...

@Abhi
as HP wud say "Moi is da first comment"
Really overwhelming.I witnessed the same during the heavy rain last week, i saw a leper on the road side......begging in the pouring rain n feeling happy for it rained to wash his body off.......twas such an incredibly painful site, but he seemed to be so nonchalant about the various people tripping on him.
I guess u just took my thoughts away n conveyed them in ur own beautiful way

mattu said...

@Abhi
I am totally blown away by the way u express urself......
absolutely awesome!
Keep it up....damn impressive stuff here

kurt said...

#Abhi






njoi
Kurt

kurt said...

#ppl
For those who didn't guess my previous comment.
It meant No Comments :)))

#Abhi
Too good dude.
Am speechless.

njoi
Kurt

Snehal said...

@Abhi ,
Can u please enlighten me abt the rhyming scheme used in ur poem.

Sidey jokes saide. Just one word to decribe ur poem -
Beautiful
N yes keep goin on and on dude

HP said...

Touching to say the least!!

HP

As If said...

Abhi saar, tussi gr8 likhte ho. Now I can be sure, I have one great writer when our site gets launched :)

Abhi said...

Hey All u gud ppl :))
Thanks for ur words...

Thank you !!!
Thank you !!!

nd haan, Snehal abt Rhyme Scheme, i purposely dont go for it ... actually i like poem to be narrated rather than to sing it :)

Chow,
Abhi.

Abhi said...

#Mattu

interesting Buddy !!

i tuk half a day to set up the theme :)) nd u almost saw the theme ...

Priya said...

Hey Abhi! Extremely well written! Or rather well "Narrated" must i say :-) In most of my poems, thers a deliberate rhyme. But if a poetry can be formed so beautiful & expressive then who cares for the rhyme yaar! Keep it goin!

~Pri..

Abhi said...

#Pri

Thanks buddy :))

Ziom said...

I don't think i am even qualified to comment on this too

HP said...

Time for a new post Dude...

Cheers,
HP

Abhi said...

#hp

exams rey .. hav some themes under construction .. may b after that exams i'll post it .

~ said...

Hi Abhi, The theme is flawless but the language is. I felt that you are complicating the writing. And the use of articles needs to be looked at. I don't know whether "dialogue" has plural. I got a confusion abt "Not so loud", "voice strong enough", "low cry". May be my language is very poor to understand this. I found glitches in other posts also. Please take this in a positive note. Keep blogging & keep improving.
Thanks
Prem

Abhi said...

#Prem

points taken on a positive side :)

Chow,
Abhi.