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Wednesday, May 03, 2006

Words Of a Tresspasser

A beautiful crack of dawn to begin with,
fine-looking clear vapors in the sky above.

But hardly they lasted long to stand against the
metal beasts that folks used for voyage.

A good looking field of lawn that marked the beginning of a civilization,
Eager was I to have a peep at the folks who lived there by;

Passed two to three dwelling ; but was not a healthy weather I experienced;
Something was wrong ; something misplaced; something departed,
The silence grew as I moved towards a house;
the jingle of crows was the only thing lucid...

Then I visualized a half aware Mother being accompanied by some women ,
approached a motionless body ;
Even God was unsuccessful to discontinue the Mother's cry for her youth son;
who could not react to his Mother's call...

My Body also rusted at this heartbreaking picture.

Inhabitants attended the son's last journey;
leaving behind a Mother who tried unsuccessfully to stop the journey...

I walked through the society with pieces of mind;
making futile attempts to bind myself by,

After some space could identify some men,
who looked delightful with cheerful minds.

Almost immediatedly I recognized;
They were celebrating an episode of birth of baby boy;
I was blessed with the sight of Mother playing with her charming son,
Felt if she trying to bring down skies for her suggary baby.

The whole atmosphere grew more and more beautiful with the incoming folks ;
who never failed to kiss the new born's rosy cheeks.

That's life; that's existence; that's living ;
where no one recognizes the Chapters to be read by.

I advanced frontwards with the pictures in my sack ;
With the sunset behind me marking the beginning of the night ....

~Abhi

16 comments:

mattu said...

@Abhi
Oh my god!
good one dost,
keep it up, whtever gives u the inspiration to write such stuff.
Commendable effort dost

HP said...

@Abhi,
Kya Kahe Na Kya Kahe, Kaisi Mushkil Aahe :-)
Are you sure you did your graduation in Computer Science and not literature??

@Mattu,
Good One Dost! You understood everything he wrote :-)

Cheers,
HP

kurt said...
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kurt said...

#HP
I agree wid u.

#Abhi
Please let me how many days were spent of this post?
Dude i wonder frm where do u get the inspiration to write all this stuff???

Neways the post is gr8 dude !!!!


njoi
Kurt

kurt said...

#Abhi
Sumthing for you

He looks like a nerd,
But is always ahead of the herd.

He looks like he is shy,
But frm inside he's a tough guy.

He looks very quiet,
But when he speaks the world keeps quiet.

He looks like a Abhijit (Sawant):)))))
But he sings like Debojit.

njoi
Kurt

Abhi said...

Thank you guys for ur valuable comments

#Mattu

Thanks for ur words :))

@Hari

plz trust me :)) I did my gradutaion in Comp Sci. Hav proofs for the same ... yaar :))

#Kurt

to be honest ... total of 3 nd a 1/2 day for the blog .
1 day for theme nd remaining to complete it .

btw nice poem Dude :))

Chow,
Abhi

HP said...

@Kurt,

Understood your words..yippee..

Ur poem was great too!!

Cheers,
HP

kurt said...

#Ppl
Plz refer to Abhi's comments.
to be honest ... total of 3 nd a 1/2 day for the blog .
1 day for theme nd remaining to complete it .


Wht we have here is a real FUKAT!!!
Man you are givin all of us a run for our money.
hmmmmm.....

njoi,
Kurt

Abhi said...

#Kurt

When I say total of 3 nd a 1/2 day for the blog . .. it means the total of all the time invested nd not all the 3 nd a 1/2 days at one go.

I hope this clears u Buddy :))

kurt said...

#Abhi
Tht's my point, investing 3 & 1/2 days for a post qualifies for being a fukat :).

Ask HP how much time does he invest in creating a post?
Am sure he does not spend more than 5 mins, coz he just cuts/copies->pastes
:)

njoi
Kurt

kurt said...

#Abhi
Dude no hard feelings, am just kiddin.
Your post is a true masterpiece.

As they say at the resturants:-
Good food takes time to prepare.

I guess the same applies here:-
Good post takes time to be published

P.S.: This doesn't apply to Snehal's posts.
(Sorry Snehal, but couldn't resist)

njoi,
Kurt

Abhi said...

#Kurt
no hard feelings at all.. jaa maaf kiya :))

#Hari ..
does the allegations against u stand true ???

Priya said...

Hey Abhi...Nice 1 yaar!!! I read it long time back...Jus cldnt comment bfore...Keep it up! Keep it goin!...

~Cheers
Pri..

Ziom said...

I don't think i am even qualified to comment on it

~ said...

Fall & Rise explained in small & nice. I liked this one from all other ones.

Abhi said...

Thanks Prem :)