An evening in the woods with the light breeze and the orange sky;
where the leaves were on a walking spree ...
I stood there in; such a soothing atmosphere;
thinking of her , before; I could think of anything else...
How will it be ; when, I will be walking with her...
The way, she would hold my hand;
as if, an attempt to keep all the petals of a flower together...
The elegance in her eye lashes; which would speak, for our silent conversation...
A feel, that ,she is so apt for me;
The content within me ; each time I see her,
An inner voice; that, she brings me closer to life...
I never felt like grabbing her attention...
The small pot of affection within me;
always in an attempt to burst; with some words for her ...
The roots of confusion;
grows deeper and stronger within me each day ...
I always find myself binded by the question ...
"Should I say something ... to her ... today ?... "
The shades of the trees ; as the night made it's appearance;
But , a hope of moon light, through the talking shadows ...
And the next day; I saw her again ...
~Abhi

10 comments:
Nice one Dude!
Romance is in the air :-)
I had written something which ended similarly :-)
Tanx :)
Did you post your version ??
//eye lashes - What is it called ;)
I suddenly remembered that girl in Patni with kohl :)
//The roots of confusion; grows deeper and stronger within me each day ...
I liked this... Nice play of words there.
At least you saw here again :(
@Abhi
well written dude...
story of our lives :)
would agree with anandham, you at least saw her again.
Vinod
# anandham
yeah !!! kohl :) ... spend a lot of time for the word kohl ..
# anandham , kurt
" At least you saw here again" .. hmm .. got it ..
Thx for the comments pals ...
OMG!
Love lorn
full on
No, I did not. I never posted my poems :-) They were always bad :-)
maybe, I should dig this one out and post it over here. I just remember the last 2 lines
Yesterday I saw her again..Yesterday I lost her again
:-)
#Ziom
hmmmm ...
#HP
"Yesterday I saw her again..Yesterday I lost her again " ...
I must say ... the above lines got depth Dude ... you should have posted the entire poem :)
A calm and cool composition....nice one!
Thanks Chandan :)
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