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Monday, January 25, 2010

Will Someday ... I ? ; I don't know ...

An evening in the woods with the light breeze and the orange sky;
where the leaves were on a walking spree ...
I stood there in; such a soothing atmosphere;
thinking of her , before; I could think of anything else...

How will it be ; when, I will be walking with her...
The way, she would hold my hand;
as if, an attempt to keep all the petals of a flower together...
The elegance in her eye lashes; which would speak, for our silent conversation...

A feel, that ,she is so apt for me;
The content within me ; each time I see her,
An inner voice; that, she brings me closer to life...

I never felt like grabbing her attention...

The small pot of affection within me;
always in an attempt to burst; with some words for her ...

The roots of confusion;
grows deeper and stronger within me each day ...

I always find myself binded by the question ...
"Should I say something ... to her ... today ?... "

The shades of the trees ; as the night made it's appearance;
But , a hope of moon light, through the talking shadows ...

And the next day; I saw her again ...

~Abhi

10 comments:

HP said...

Nice one Dude!
Romance is in the air :-)

I had written something which ended similarly :-)

Abhi said...

Tanx :)

Did you post your version ??

Anonymous said...

//eye lashes - What is it called ;)

I suddenly remembered that girl in Patni with kohl :)

//The roots of confusion; grows deeper and stronger within me each day ...

I liked this... Nice play of words there.

At least you saw here again :(

kurt said...

@Abhi
well written dude...
story of our lives :)

would agree with anandham, you at least saw her again.

Vinod

Abhi said...

# anandham

yeah !!! kohl :) ... spend a lot of time for the word kohl ..

# anandham , kurt

" At least you saw here again" .. hmm .. got it ..

Thx for the comments pals ...

Ziom said...

OMG!
Love lorn
full on

HP said...

No, I did not. I never posted my poems :-) They were always bad :-)

maybe, I should dig this one out and post it over here. I just remember the last 2 lines

Yesterday I saw her again..Yesterday I lost her again
:-)

Abhi said...

#Ziom

hmmmm ...

#HP

"Yesterday I saw her again..Yesterday I lost her again " ...

I must say ... the above lines got depth Dude ... you should have posted the entire poem :)

VJay Arts said...

A calm and cool composition....nice one!

Abhi said...

Thanks Chandan :)