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Sunday, November 29, 2009

The Artist ... "Woman"


She builds you diligently; like a potter designs the pot,
She knows you better than you know yourself;
She stands strong; so that only good reaches you...
Only one beautiful word to honor that divine relation ... Mummy

Her bag of stories never dries up;
She is the lyricist, composer for your dreams...
She understands your language of voices;
She imagines your future; she makes you feel special ... Granny

She never forgets to share, even a small piece of sweet with you;
Many faces to converse with;
but she makes a special presence among the others...
A voice that cares for you ,even when;
you don't care for yourself;
that is how she defines the relation ... Sister

Many fights with her; over all the things in the world,
The depth of silence that gets carried;
for minutes, hours and days...
But when things are not working and no shoulder to stand by;
She stands there with an aid;
at just a feet distance,
respecting the relation ... Friend

She is the best, at the language of the eyes;
She builds the happiness around you...
She stands by your every decision;
like the last leaf for a branch,
She ensures , you are always revered as a glittering star ... Wife

I stand captivated, by these different shades of relations;
portrayed by the artist, in a single lifetime...

The Artist ... "Woman"

~Abhi

12 comments:

HP said...

Nice. This one is good.

~ said...

Yes indeed its a lovely one from your lot.

She is an Artist... Also she is an Art of God...

I just want to know how did you come up about the "Wife" thing? ;)

P.S: I'm moving into wordpress here onwards.
http://anandham.wordpress.com

Abhi said...

Thanks HP !!!

#Anandham

Thank you ...

hmm .. Wife ... :) I felt like writing about it ... Can say that ... I picked up the words from my so far observation.

And I would also like to mention ; that "Wife" stanza took me the longest to compose :) ; dont know why ...

Regards,
Abhi

~ said...

Yeah dude... "Wife" or "the so called GFs" are the toughest subject to understand... :)

~ said...

Dude... also allow other users other than blogger to post the comments. I'm not able to put comments using my wordpress id.

Abhi said...

#Anadham

Well your point -- "Wife" or "the so called GFs" are the toughest subject to understand ..."

I think , if one really plans to understand them ... one can succeed , atleast to some extent ..

~Abhi

mattu said...

ahem ahem nice one and sorry for the nitpicking but I'd prefer reading "Mother" instead of Mummy :P
Rest assured if you understand gfs/wives...there is no guarantee u will succeed ;)

Abhi said...

#mattu,

u nitpick each time ; & I come up with an explanation ..

So, here you go ..

"Mummy" is used instead of "Mother" to bring the theme much closer to the concept of shades of relations.

Mother - is a relation .. agreed .
but "Mummy" -- gives it a sense of attachment.

your point -- "if you understand gfs/wives...there is no guarantee u will succeed"

ha ha .. I agree .. :)

~Abhi

kurt said...

#abhi
Good show dost, very well written...
i like the granny wala part...

keep inking...

kurt

Abhi said...

Thanks Kurt :)

Unknown said...

Nice poetry and great way to describe a woman. Normally you get men just thinking that they are just one bane of their life.

Abhi said...

Thanks Patcy :)