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Thursday, May 08, 2008

The Fence ...

( A female perspective ...)

I found him adjusting the disturbed table cloth;
and having a glance at every subtleness of the decoration;

He open heartedly invited the guests,
with a living anxiety, fear of the approaching beautiful time...

I was excited with all the preparations, the week long shopping spree,
My pals added up the joy for the occasion with the secret talks and jokes,

Though I made fun of girls who cry at this occasion,
whom I thought are still not modern at heart;
This time I found myself in the same cage, as if I gulped some truth to digest...

Never understood; why I suddenly felt an additional bondage, with all the things besides me ...

And I realized my recipe in the kitchen, in the middle of my thoughts,

I saw him watching me with contented eyes ; in between of his newspaper updates;
I advanced towards him with a blank mind, and managed to disturb him; by plucking a grey hair from his half bald head;

He pinched me back with a complacent on his face,
And I landed up with a smile with droplets in my eyes ...

I looked back at the distance ; I moved from kitchen;
I felt as if punched by, a calming thought; a self-assurance ; a soothe;

And a feel ; "I took these many years, to cross this barrier to perceptive... ?"

~Abhi

9 comments:

Unknown said...

The first thought that came to my mind, Where is the fence dude?

Unknown said...

gaat it

~ said...

The post created in my mind lots of weird scenarios. Only thing I’m pretty sure about was there is a long term relationship in stake here and there was a fence before, which is no more after the scene of the blog.

Later a wordily conversation with the author, let me decipher the whole situation without any confusion.

This is a new perspective of thinking. Well written Abhi. There is punch in the last line.

Abhi said...

#Moiz,

I hope u cld get the fence .. :)
Cool .

# Anandham,

Thanks Dude !! I still recollect each and every question of urs after reading the blog. he he :)

Thanks for ur words Dost !!!

Regards,
Abhi

kurt said...

#Abhi

I dont like to repeat my comments again...
but dude, i couldn't understand ur bhavnaoo ko...
plz help me understand or shld i say decipher it...

anyways i liked the feel u had in the beginning but it kinda started to fading towards the end... mebbe am wrong, plz do correct me...

njoi,
Kurt

Abhi said...

#Kurt,

Dost !!!!

The understanding , the comfort level in a relationship.

I hav tried to show up the above mentioned things in the post..

Regards,
Abhi

HP said...

Wow!
You must be a genius!

Only geniuses are never understood in their lieftime :-D

Cheers,
HP

kurt said...

hmmmm... got it...

dude, u rock man...
how can u think of all this stuff amidst your hectic work schedule???

Abhi said...

#HP,

Sir .. I dunno what to say ..
So .. "Thanks" !!!!! :)

#Kurt,

Thengyu !!! :)

If I am not wrong ...The last 3 lines of the post took me 3 weeks .. I was just not finding the right words , terms and hmm .... to put things right ...

Regards,
Abhi