( A female perspective ...)
I found him adjusting the disturbed table cloth;
and having a glance at every subtleness of the decoration;
He open heartedly invited the guests,
with a living anxiety, fear of the approaching beautiful time...
I was excited with all the preparations, the week long shopping spree,
My pals added up the joy for the occasion with the secret talks and jokes,
Though I made fun of girls who cry at this occasion,
whom I thought are still not modern at heart;
This time I found myself in the same cage, as if I gulped some truth to digest...
Never understood; why I suddenly felt an additional bondage, with all the things besides me ...
And I realized my recipe in the kitchen, in the middle of my thoughts,
I saw him watching me with contented eyes ; in between of his newspaper updates;
I advanced towards him with a blank mind, and managed to disturb him; by plucking a grey hair from his half bald head;
He pinched me back with a complacent on his face,
And I landed up with a smile with droplets in my eyes ...
I looked back at the distance ; I moved from kitchen;
I felt as if punched by, a calming thought; a self-assurance ; a soothe;
And a feel ; "I took these many years, to cross this barrier to perceptive... ?"
~Abhi

9 comments:
The first thought that came to my mind, Where is the fence dude?
gaat it
The post created in my mind lots of weird scenarios. Only thing I’m pretty sure about was there is a long term relationship in stake here and there was a fence before, which is no more after the scene of the blog.
Later a wordily conversation with the author, let me decipher the whole situation without any confusion.
This is a new perspective of thinking. Well written Abhi. There is punch in the last line.
#Moiz,
I hope u cld get the fence .. :)
Cool .
# Anandham,
Thanks Dude !! I still recollect each and every question of urs after reading the blog. he he :)
Thanks for ur words Dost !!!
Regards,
Abhi
#Abhi
I dont like to repeat my comments again...
but dude, i couldn't understand ur bhavnaoo ko...
plz help me understand or shld i say decipher it...
anyways i liked the feel u had in the beginning but it kinda started to fading towards the end... mebbe am wrong, plz do correct me...
njoi,
Kurt
#Kurt,
Dost !!!!
The understanding , the comfort level in a relationship.
I hav tried to show up the above mentioned things in the post..
Regards,
Abhi
Wow!
You must be a genius!
Only geniuses are never understood in their lieftime :-D
Cheers,
HP
hmmmm... got it...
dude, u rock man...
how can u think of all this stuff amidst your hectic work schedule???
#HP,
Sir .. I dunno what to say ..
So .. "Thanks" !!!!! :)
#Kurt,
Thengyu !!! :)
If I am not wrong ...The last 3 lines of the post took me 3 weeks .. I was just not finding the right words , terms and hmm .... to put things right ...
Regards,
Abhi
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