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Tuesday, January 01, 2008

Some ... Some confusions ...

I always felt glad at heart;
I often revived those moments; when she talked to me;

I never found any thing erroneous,
in having a conversation with her;
Though my friends clunged to me with weird conclusions;

A round of interrogation with my heart,
and my brain supervising the entire occasion;
helped me in cutting short my question " Am I in ..... ? "

"comfort level" ... "similar perspective"... was the final decision of the jury...

I helped a cute stranger in getting her baggage into the train;
I started believing in luck when I saw her having window seat, next to me;

Never understood why did I play a hero of the anecdotes, I narrated to her;
Though fractionally bored, she never seemed drooping of my chronicles,

The journey did not a have a joyful ending but a hope;
by words ... "See you sometime"

It took no time for the jury in myself to ask me;
"Why am I trying to astonish her ?" ... " Can I not be natural ? "

"It is not how it should be " ... was the answer for the question "Am I in ... ?" this time;

Though incidents prove me wrong at all the occasions;
I have an optimistic attitude,
to understand things better; judge my feelings aptly;

A charming girl gave me an amicable smile;

Though I understood the smile caught me accidently,
on its way to one of her buddies;
Afraid of the jilt I was about to make ;
I smiled back in ritual but with a pleased heart;

"My fortune about to work ... ? " ; ... a possible ... affection ... ;

How will I know … ? ...

~Abhi

8 comments:

Unknown said...

#Abhi
Chooottttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
Kaun thi woh?

Also, this is your first post which I completely understood

Abhi said...

@Moiz

he he ... :)

glad to know that u understood the post ... !!!!!

HP said...

Dude....

You are in love :-D

Enjoy!!!

Cheers,
HP

Abhi said...

#HP

ha ha ...

u cleared off the confusion of the character mentioned in the narration .. :)

Regards,
Abhi

kurt said...

#Abhi
Couldn't make Head/Tail of the post...
kidding dude, lekin it was tough understand

But nice use of words, good supense, i hope u have part 2 of this post coming out, coz we need to know her name. :)

njoi,
Kurt

Abhi said...

# Kurt,

ha ha ... njoyed ur comments .. Dude :) .. Thx !!!!

Well .. i wld like to mention that .. i tried to narrate how a guy made conclusions out of 3 incidents of which he was part .. :) ..

sure .. sure .. will write more ...

Regards,
Abhi

~ said...

You told me that it's 2 girls. But when I have reread it it sounds like 3 girls. :)

Is it a tendency or some harmone activity which makes us to make others astonish at us? I'm not sure.

The other link I told you abt is http://bogusgenius.blogspot.com/search?updated-max=2007-02-25T14%3A03%3A00%2B05%3A30&max-results=5

Abhi said...

#anandham

I did say ; the post is abt 3 girls .. seems mis-communication .. :)

nd yeah !!!... making others feel amazed @ us .. hmmm .. human behaviour .. normal stuff ..
whadya say ??

Regards,
Abhi