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Sunday, July 08, 2012

And then, She saw me

Her eyes had no idea about me looking at her.

I saw her gazing at the girls passing by,
and her eyebrows answered with an envious look.

She adjusted her hair against the slight storm within her and
finished it with a satisfaction on her face.

I saw her tapping her feet in rhythm
and her lips singing a silent song.
No one could take her out of this wind symphony.

I saw her examining the looks of a good looking guy.
Though diligent enough to, not get noticed,
her face smiled biting her tongue; when she was caught.

She corrected her strand of hair, to tuck it behind her ears,
and fixed her look in the opposite direction to avoid any confusion.

With no moments to break
I saw her staring at a distance into the sky,
and her eyes sparkled with thoughts of happiness.

I saw her innocent face and the delightful lips,
as she cuddled a baby at a distance.

My eyes were surrounded by the waves of her expressions;
and then she saw me.

I , I , with no disagreement , took my eyes down to earth to adore the feminine beauty.                                                                                                                                     ~Abhi

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

This is more straight forward... Who wouldn't like such a girl :)

Ziom said...

I think it was straight out of a movie where the boy and girl see each other for the first time. Felt like I was reading a script :)

HP said...

Felt it was just okay :-)

Abhi said...

@ anandham, Ziom, HP

Thank you for the comments, Guys.

Let me come up with some more themes.

~Abhi