Though not so potent, as the stream gush down the foothill,
but sluggishly, the little droplets descended the cheeks;
those salty drops which composed the hurt in the feelings ...
A disturbed sensation in the heart,
conforming with, a desire to wing across the sky, with those unborn wings;
conforming with, thousand answers to surround, but no questions to counterpart them ...
The beauty of the first light of the day at the dawn;
The sight of the shadow invading at dusk;
gives a delight sensation of loneliness ...
A command over the whole world;
but still; leaves the puzzle of the unquestioned answers... incomplete ...
The sparkling waves of sea, dancing to the song of the wind;
The sight of the ships reaching the horizon;
lights up joy in the eyes, smile embraces the lips ...
A stroke of contentment hits the heart;
gives a stimulus to move on,
Yet,there remains a ladder; to descend to those unpleasant memories ...
In the amidst of all these emotions,
A sight of anyone needy; a necessity to manage a trouble,
brings out unconscious action to reach out ...
The chocking saliva; the sobbing breath, compromises with self-confidence ...
Hitherto, still, leaving behind oceans of black melodies;
who, deserve a smile; a drop of tear; each time one recollects them,
May be ... as a Barter ... May be ...
~Abhi
6 comments:
hmmm i can't wait any longer for snehal...
@abhi
goes without saying good one.
@HP,
For me this post sums up the mood of bombay, perhaps mine too.
@abhi fir se:
good, except a spelling mistake...perhaps choking instead of chocking? :P or maybe chocking it is?
#mattu
Tanx :)
yes, its Chocking, it is used to describe the feel , when we experience smthg painful, a sensation in the throat, as if say .. hard to digest , a ball of sadness , a block !!!
~Abhi
Reminds me of the day I left Mumbai for Mangalore...
#Anandham
Thx for the comments ...
The theme was set after the Raigad Trek
~ Abhi
#Abhi
Once again an excellent post dude...
coz, i didn't understand a single word :)
Thanks for sending the summary...
You are getting better with every post, you should post most more often...
njoi
Kurt
#kurt
Thengyu !!!
Yes .. will try to post one more , after Xmas .... lets c ...
It seems you were away from net for some time ... hmmmm
~Abhi
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